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I like it! It was a joy to see the progression. Gotta love that accent :)... this may be unhelpful advice..all the same: I think the ''D'' in God needs to be more prominent. I know we put our tongues to the pallet of our mouth when we're sayin it... but it just doesn't read here. I think it might work better with closed teeth. Same goes for ''want'' throw in some closed teeth and hold it a bit, also snap onto a closed teeth at the end when it say it. I think you handled "Vatican" very well.Hope it helps
that's wonderful!!!great animation!
This is great! I would love to try doing something like this! I only draw pictures so far - but who knows? I might do animation one day!:D
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